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your life seems fine and all on track
then "BANG" your lifes in shreds
you wake and you weem to be lost you dont know where you are
its really quite alarming
theres smoke everywhere you cant see a thing
you hear a sound and wonder what
you realize your trapped in a car its on fire its everywhere souronding you
noones coming to save you you wonder why??
you hear people you start to scream for help.. then you realize there not there anymore
you see them standing there you wonder why there not helping you you scream out for them to help you feel the fire burning you skin  you scream but not for help anymore for the fact its burning your skin your screaming and screaming and screaming you realize again that nones aving youits getting closer you hear a noise and wonder what it is the hissing stops but the pains still there you just want to get out of that awfull place you want them to save you
then its over in one single "BANG" your lidfe is taken from that place and gone on to a better world......??!??
©2007-2009 ~rocangelic
:iconrocangelic:

Author's Comments

well this is about a car that was dumped right near my house and set on fire i dont know if anyone was in there but it was on my mind.......!

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:icongeevampire:
I like this poem.... it's really good

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“It tastes like somebody stole my wallet. Ya know?”
:iconrocangelic:
thanks chloe im glad you like it .........?!?
i like some of your poems to ........ xoxo
see ya at lunch if we ever get out

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Im Me AnD If U DoNt LiKe It, YoU Can LeAvE mE AlOnE... xoxo
:iconrocangelic:
thanks it has alot of feeling anyway how r u................? i am so bored seriously sose is such a bludge.......?

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Im Me AnD If U DoNt LiKe It, YoU Can LeAvE mE AlOnE... xoxo
:iconcarriedmycross:
This creates a good atmosphere. But I suggest strongly that you edit it correctly...it sometimes seems a little hard to read. Otherwise it's gr8.

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God Bless You
:iconall-my-life-i-dream:
i'm good and i seriously agree SOSE is so boring, we don't even learn anything new!
:iconrocangelic:
i know and she excpects us to be good and not bored its so aannoying

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Im Me AnD If U DoNt LiKe It, YoU Can LeAvE mE AlOnE... xoxo
:iconrocangelic:
ok thankz

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Im Me AnD If U DoNt LiKe It, YoU Can LeAvE mE AlOnE... xoxo
:iconall-my-life-i-dream:
i agree, its so annying

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October 31, 2007
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